Below is my entry for Amel1995's Summer Caption Contest. I would simply throw a link to it, but there appears to have been some issue with posting it there.
Head on over there and check out the impressive number & scope of entries! (but please, read mine here so you see the story in its correct order.) I am certain that getting all those captions posted at once was a challenging ordeal and took a while to load.
And do look for when voting is open there too!
"BdHips&All"
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---p01
{holy-crap, what a night!} Amel
thought as he slowly woke from a night of fitful and erotic dreams.
He didn't want to open his eyes yet,
as the sense of being on the edge of a hangover-headache hit his
groggy mind almost as much as his need to go pee did, and if he
opened his eyes it would hurt.
{how much & what did i drink?}
So, he lay still, dreading what it
would feel like to sit up too soon.
Still, he did have to pee, and in
such a bad way that he felt like his bladder might not wait long!
{oh, man! my morning wood sure feels
weird,} he noted silently as he let his body roll onto his back.
{that's odd. i cant feel the sheet
against my pecker, but i still feel like i'm hard as a rock! and why
is my chest so soft...& heavy?}
He moved one hand to his chest
and the other hand to his crotch, but
each felt as if they were on the skin of a woman, though Amel could
feel soft fingers gliding up his belly and down his abdomen to reach
his pelv... "Wh-where's my dick!?" he heard a girl's voice
say as he sat upright to the feeling of small weights shifting on his
pecs.
Tender nipples met slim fingers as
smooth thighs clamped onto a delicate hand, which forced it to part
the swollen dampness there.
"OhMyGhawd! I sound like...I-I'm
s-still in her bh-body?! How can..."
Amel reached for the back of a head
he'd, a moment ago, thought having was only a wicked dream, and felt
the silken, blonde locks, but no seam beneath them now.
{damn, can't hold it, i've gotta go
like this!} he thought as he stood to prance toward the bathroom.
===p02
Amel struggled briefly before
relaxing his unfamiliar muscled enough to pee, but soon felt the
pressure of his innards relieved by the spray from his new female
organs. {oh, man, that's better! it feels oddly familiar like...}
As his bladder emptied he began to
recall that yesterday he'd agreed to help Viv test some kind of new
party-drug she had concocted in chemistry lab.
The post-doctorate researcher decided "Feels nice
against my
to fund her continuing studies making & my skin, but it
doesn't
selling designer drugs and
'study-aids'. seem to fit very well. I
'Doc. V.', as she liked to be called,
had still
sound like myself.
promised Amel an 'A' if he'd help test
a Oh yeah,
Doc.V. said I
new formula she named 'Bod-hips-&-all'.
had to pee
after I put
They hit an off-campus club that he'd
this...her,
on. Maybe
never been to and met a couple of girls
that will help
hide my
who knew Doc. V. at a semi-quiet booth.
bulging member
too."
After some drinks, Viv asked Amel if
he wanted to get laid tonight, then put
a
dose into the blonde's drink and waited
for it to kick-in. The girl took Viv to
the
restroom and Doc. returned after a few
minutes, handed Amel the blonde's
purse.
"Put what's inside on before you
go pee."
The purse contained what looked like
the dress the girl had been wearing, until he took it out and
discovered the dress was still covering what appeared to be a
bodysuit which felt like skin and looked like the hot blonde.
Amel was shocked, but also turned-on
at the idea, and slipped the chick's empty skin over his own, male
body.
---p03
He turned to the urinal, lifted the
pink dress and pulled her black thong aside to free his, (When Amel
slipped the suit over himself there seemed to be a condom-like sleeve
where his gear should go, but once fully into the girl's skin, it
looked like he had pushed her vagina inside-out), oddly-formed penis
so he could pee, and once he
started the flow all hell seemed to
break
loose as the skin-suit began tightening
all "No lie, b-Bod, h-Hips and ALL!
around his body, genitals included,
which I wonder if she f-feels what I'm
grew smaller with every c.c. he
emptied! doin' to her puh-hussy?! I sure
Trying to hold his pecker out toward
the d-dOH-hell-y-yeAH! Mine now!
urinal became increasingly difficult
and he How long will this stuff last?"
had to step closer until he was just
above
it with nothing outside his crotch to
hold.
Amel watched his flat pelvis issue
fluid
while he felt his face being molded in
to
hers, along with the rest of his male
form!
Too aroused by these sensations, Amel
stumbled back and began rubbing the
hot,
wet space which had taken the place of
the grotesque protrusion! Unable to
stop
himself, Amel quickly reached a climax
so
intense his low groans became high
gasps!
It took him a while to recover and
freshen up before returning to where Doc.V. waited with the other
girl, who Amel watched add a dose of the 'BodHips&All' to her own
drink while Viv had 'Amy' sit and kissed 'her' soft lips.
Viv ordered Amy a drink, said they'd
be right back and left with the girl, who came back sounding like
Doc.V.
---p04
The brunette with the voice of Doc.V.
asked Amel what he thought of her new look then guided his smaller &
weaker body to standing in the strong arms of the taller woman before
laying an urgent, passionate kiss on him. Feeling their modest
breasts pressing between them stoked the new furnace inside Amel's
sexy, borrowed form.
Even more arousing to the boy in the
li'l-
blonde body was seeing the beautifully "Feels f-fAB-ulous, Doc! But,
buff brunette display the mannerisms & your v-voice hasn't ch-anged."
movements of the Doc. while Viv's voice "I haven't come yet, Amy. Is
left a stranger's mouth to order
drinks . your li'l-pussy ready for it?"
{i've never felt more sensual in my
life}
thought Amel as they cuddled together
over their drinks and Viv said that
he'd
not answered whether he wanted to get
laid tonight, to which he nodded
eagerly.
Doc.V. paid the tab and led Amel by
the
hand as they left the club. He thrilled
to
the sexy, natural feel of swishing an
ass
like he now had and the erotic flatness
above his smooth thighs rubbing
together.
{lesbian sex, yea! hope she's got
toys!}
he thought, leaving without any men in
tow.
Amel loved feeling & sounding so
petite & feminine next to Viv that it didn't take long to get
into his panties and lick his pussy to his second fit of female
orgasms that left him wanting something more! So, when Viv took out
her borrowed she-cock Amel was more than willing to have the chemist
use it inside his hungry womanhood!
---p05
Amel could not say no, even if he
had wanted to! Not with the most
incredible sensations of pleasure he'd ever felt filling his sexy
body!
"I-h-is it s-safe, Doc?" he
panted, wishing her cock was bigger and deeper inside his
tight-little pussy.
"Does it matter, my pretty?"
said Doc.V. as she slipped her flanged head out to tease his soaked
cunt.
Amel shook his head and pulled the
shemale back in with his legs wrapped around her beautiful ass.
Viv smiled, pushed her cock fully
inside him grinding her hips & said,
"They'll be g-h-glad you
ag-greed!"
The swelling pulse of her dick in his
pussy was immediately followed by hot lava erupting inside him and
drowning out what she had said as
Amel's body swallowed the fluid 'til it
overflowed his box & oozed out as they pumped & came
together!
They writhed in blissful abandon for
what seemed like hours and, when their climax waned, he asked how
long the BodHips&All would last before taking their 'suits' off.
"Couple more hours," replied
Doc. V., her voice still unchanged even though she'd obviously come,
a lot!
Amel went to pee after they lay in
each-others arms, but he felt strange as his bladder emptied. A
loose, pulling, stretching sensation made his head spin, then black
out.
When Amel 'awoke', he could feel
strong arms & hands caressing all over his body, which was still
small and smooth and female...& horny!
"Now I want to give you a
'thank-you' ride on this," the man holding him said as he guided
Amel atop his muscular body and made known his size & readiness
to fuck Amel.
'Amy' backed slowly onto his rod.
---p06
Amy was shaken from his reverie of
last night's escapades when he heard a door close and Doc.V. call for
him by the female name she'd been using last night. He realized that
having to wipe after, rather than having to sit, was truly the
biggest issue about peeing as a girl, as wiping himself while
recalling some of last night's events had led to frigging his pussy
after relieving his bladder, and he was now recovering from numerous
orgasms!
"In the bathroom. I'll be out in
a sec," he called, a last swipe {she promised
me an 'A', but
peaking his arousal again, aided by his
reflection while adding her solid 'C' may be
better!}
a hair band, washing his hands &
rinsing with mouthwash.
Viv was nearly naked when he got back
to the bed and sat
beside her for tender & passionate
good morning kisses.
Seeing his puzzled expression, Viv
told him how grateful
her friends are for what he & Doc
had done last night.
"Adam is SO glad you're willing
to take her body, Amy!
And now that I've gotten some things
out of her way,
Vanessa is the woman she's always
wanted to be."
"You mean, that guy was... my
male body is..."
Amy remembered seeing Viv & the
she-
male return from the bathroom, but...
his mouth dropped open, eyes wide.
Doc.V. giggled as she pulled off her
panties to let the penis now standing
erect above her pussy spring free.
"Isn't BodHips&All fantastic
stuff?
Let me thank you for helping test it!"
(the end?)
Very interesting. I really like the concept of the change that takes place for all of them. The interaction between them was a little hard to follow from time to time, but still nice none the less. Best of luck to you on the caption contest! I'll have to keep my eyes out for it next time around. You wouldn't mind a little extra competition, right? ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Hewy! I truly appreciate your comment & critique. And considering the "Theme" of the contest I submitted it to, I truly missed the boat.
DeleteBy all means, keep your eyes peeled for contests to enter your pieces into, but I only threw my hat into this ring in response to the hosts invitation. I pretty-much gave up on feeling competitive about my caps some time ago. They're an art form, after all, and as such are subject to the tastes & whims of those judging. Still, If the mood hits, I'll welcome invitations for comparison!
Peace,Love&Kisses!!!
They really can be an art form, and you are right. Much like I've heard it before, beauty is in the eye of the beholder. What one individual enjoys, another might dislike. We just create what we think is enjoyable, and that's the important part. :) Keep up the good work.
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