Friday, June 22, 2012

"AppSnap" or "Out of Her Brain on the Train"

  Here is the full version of my third entry in the June contest at Rachel's Haven.

  Due to the constraints of the contest, I had to submit a shortened version for the contest itself. I have posted both versions of pg. 4. with '...04alt' being the one that runs the whole story. Which includes 'appearances' by Rachel and Bren.

  Composing this has been troubled by more R-L interruptions than I care to mention, so, like it or not; here is:

"AppSnap" or "Out of Her Brain on the Train"