Tuesday, August 18, 2015

"Family Retreat" or "Curse of the Wooded Hills" pt.3

  Another piece of my caption for "Frantic Eddie" of "The Wizard of Darkness TG Captions".
  I had intended to make one more page of this, but decided this might be the place to stop. What do y'all think?

Part 1 , Part 2



  1. It seems like a good ending but it would be cool to see maybe one more page. Maybe one with a newly pregnant Lucia and Loren going to have sex.

    1. Thanks for the input, Mira! I'll see what I can come up with.

  2. Replies
    1. Quite the enigmatic critique, Lucia! I've been waiting to know whether you feel this is sufficient to the story, or if you'd like some more. (sadly, this is the only image of "your expecting form" that I have... I think.)

    2. I don't know really. Want to be nice as possible, but I don't know how to exactly how to do that. I'll just say that I respectfully think it's well written. Just not my cup of tea. I love your stuff, though, and I consider you one of my closer confidants.

    3. Honesty is good, Lucia so, thank you. And I am honestly sorry for not making something more to your liking this time. No hard feelings, dear, (which is both a good and a bad thing in this case ;-/ ). I'm honored, though, and look forward to trying again sometime.