"Believe Me Now?" Var.02
Elle
ADVISORY! If you;Don't enjoy,Can't abide,Or are legally prevented from viewing: Explicit adult material of TG/TF themes, PLEASE DEPART NOW! Otherwise, WELCOME!
ADVISORY! If you;Don't enjoy,Can't abide,Or are legally prevented from viewing: Explicit adult material of TG/TF themes, PLEASE DEPART NOW! Otherwise, WELCOME!
I like this version better. I get to see the other characters talking.
ReplyDeleteTHank you for the input, Wolfie! I'll try to keep in mind that you like the color-differentiation of individuals' dialogue, (or 'bubbles' around said words, I'll assume would also be acceptable?).
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Elle
Yes most definitely
DeleteHehehehehe . . . I had a HARD time keeping track of who was who! I really enjoyed this one!
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Zapper
Hmm... Not sure if that's a good thing, Zapper, but I often have to read some of your captions two or three time to make sure of who wound up in whose body, babe! *gihiggle* Really glad you like it, though! Thanks, Sweetie!
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Elle
Elle,
DeleteWhen I said "hard" I didn't mean I had difficulty following who was who. *shakes head*
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Zappper
I have to agree with Wolf on this one, it seemed like the color coding made a big difference on who was talking, and I was still a bit confused. I saw the blue of the woman underneath, but half way through the caption blue text switched bodies, and then it started to make sense. Not too bad over all. Keep up the captions!
ReplyDeleteThank you, DeeDee! Glad to know that the twist midway worked. (I know the layout isn't really the best, and I should probably fade my logo more so the text stands out.) And, here's hoping my captions keep y'all up!
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Elle